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Oh what lies beyond this shell,
Seems so beautiful and sweet!
Think of all the stars and roses,
The fantasies I could meet!
I struggle hard to break away,
From this wretch that binds my soul.
I'm mocked so evily for my troubles,
Making taunters gain control.
Oh sweet red liquid that keeps me alive,
I pray, abandon this skin!
Flow with me into a new freedom,
Where I may live again.
©2007-2009 ~CandlelitxTragedy
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Poem I wrote today..
Very quick, so yeah.

Enjoy.

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:iconchaoticartist87:
i like it :)

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"I'll love you till death and beyond and to the eternal depths of my heart."

-myself-

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:icondarkestwon:
I really like the flow of this poem, even though it was written quickly!
Simple but well done!

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Got mi-- Wait...
Screw milk, got oxygen?
:iconcandlelitxtragedy:
thankies. ^_^

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"Sir, I love you more than word can wield the matter."
-shakespeare

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:iconcandlelitxtragedy:
Thanks!

--
"Sir, I love you more than word can wield the matter."
-shakespeare

:heart:

:gallery:
My gallery awaits you kind visit!
[link]
:icondarkestwon:
You're welcome!

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Got mi-- Wait...
Screw milk, got oxygen?
:iconself-destruct-101:
cool.
can't say I like the idea behind it, but the concept is nice.

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There is no death that is not a beginning

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